能较准确地使用高级词汇,但需作者增加词汇丰富度;文中一些从句的使用为文章增色;文章层次较为清晰。
To respect and develop the diversity of world civilization and identify common interests are a great driving force propelling human society forward. Both China and America are great powers of environment and energy resources, and have responsibility for the survival and development of human beings. The shortage of water resources willl severely prevent/hinder/restrict the development of our economy and society, so we should make more efforts to prevent and control water pollution.