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2009年专八英语作文真题:方言在公众场合使用

发布时间:2013-05-18 17:21浏览次数:10534
要求:
题目 Are Dialects Just as Acceptable in Public Places?
说明 Are Dialects Just as Acceptable in Public Places?
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:300满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分79.5分
评语:

文中词汇多样性不足,高级词汇积累做的很棒;复杂句使用不错,句法规范;文章上下文衔接自然。

用户练习作文:

To respect and develop the diversity of world civilization and identify common interests are a great driving force propelling human society forward. Both China and America are great powers of environment and energy resources, and have responsibility for the survival and development of human beings. The shortage of water resources willl severely prevent/hinder/restrict the development of our economy and society, so we should make more efforts to prevent and control water pollution. It is a great driving force for the progress of human society to respect and develop the diversity of world civilization and identify common interests China’s low taxation, low wages, large consumer market, and stable political and social environment has attracted more and more number of overseas investors.

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