拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文章层次较为清晰。
With the development of our economy, computer becomes more and more common in our daily life. We can use internet to search some information that we need. However, so much misleading information appears on the internet that we can not clarify it well. There is a list of the harm caused by misleading information online. First of all, it will make our mind mess that we do not know the truth. We do not have enough knowledge to recognise which one is true or false. It reduces the way we know something. Furthermore, many people are lack of the ability to recognise something. They will mislead. Therefore, they may use the wrong way to deal with issues. The things will be caused worse. Finally, it will influence our judgement about something. Maybe one famous movie star is a good person, but someone dislikes him, he will spread bad information about the star. We may not like the movie star any more because of this.
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