2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒；作者词汇表达不够多样，要注意单词拼写的检查；可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用。

As we ali know,nowadays,computer plays an important part of life.computer is convenient to do everythings which human beings wanna to.therefore,people are absorbed in it.each coin has two sides,as well as computer.firstly,there are some advantage in it.no one can deny that computer is actually convenient for our daily life.for example,we can buy tickets online istead of queque.