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I would like with you to visit my hometown ,handan.Handan is a old Zhaodu city.I grown up and study in there.If you com,fistly,I will with you to Guangfu which is a most traditional town.You can see and study there culture,that is interesting!And you will love there,Gungfu.Secondly,We will go to Taiji sequre .You will find that is amusing of Taiji.