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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12880
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


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句式灵活多变,再加强从句的使用会更棒;文中衔接词丰富;文章用了较为丰富的词汇,高级词汇略显单薄,同时注意单词拼写的检查。

用户练习作文:

At the picture,we can see two persons ,one of a mother and other is a son, mother writed an e-mail to her son,she want to come downstairs for something to eat,not use computer to communication .Now,electronic communication replace face-to-face,especially in the young man . Why haappend this thing? to my oppion,I am think there are two reasons.on the one hand,young man like computer,it is very interting,you can find many different friends in the internet ,

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