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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71614
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Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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when my foregin friend going to visit my hometown ,I will show him the most interestingplace in my hometown, that name is Yueyang tower ,it's have beautiful view,and it have long history.it had been very touh time,and in that time it almost destored.but finaly it be fixed,most of poemer like to poem in Yueyang tower.in the top of tower.you can see wild view,and the Dongting lake in front of your eyes.there is also many trees in that place ,and most of trees have long history,some of them you can't use your arms to hug it.If you come here I bet you will love it.

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