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The most interesting place in my hometown is guiping ,the city is beatuiful.I'll tell you something about it and I believe that you will like it. The famous tour point is guiping xi mountain,which contains many green plants and fantasty scenery.Lots of people come here for climbing and going sightseeing,they take their camere to take the surprising pictures.At the top of mountain,you can see a half part of the city,that sounds good,right? Ok, when you feel tried ,enjoy a delicious food and take a rest.The noodle rice is so famous that many people want to try and love them at last.It's ture.Just enjoy yourself. Do you be attarcted by what I said?Why not take you action to come to try,you will not regret.come on baby.
