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The most interesting place in my hometown is Guiping,the city is beautiful.I'll tell you something about it,and I believe that you will like it. The famous tour place is Guiping xi mountain,which contains many green plants and fantastic scenery. Lots of people come here for climbing and going sightseeing,and they take their camera to take the pretty pictures. At the top of the mountain,you can see a half part of the city,it sounds good,right? Besides,when you feel tried,enjoy a delicious food and take a rest. The noodle rice is so famous that many people want to try and love them at last.It's true. Just enjoy yourself. Do you be attracted by what I said?Why not take an action to come here,you will not regret. Come on baby.
