2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；文中词汇使用较丰富，高级词汇使用要加强；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨。

As we all know, mobile phones are becoming more and more important for our daily life. It takes convenience for us. But if we don't give over the bad habit--looking at our own mobile phone all the time and no matter whenever and wherever, we won't be alive without it. Don't rely on it, please. Just like the picture, people are crossing the street looking at their cell phones and using walking sticks in order to see. The phenomenon is continuing, then the world will become confusion. The traffic jams, the body illnesses and society safety can be wrong. Using mobile phone is doing more harm than good, especially overusing it can lead to many problems, such as short sight, arthrophlogosis, and etc. In order to live more long, please take your own mobile phone away as possibly as you can. Besides, when you walk along the street, raising your head to watching forward.