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Nowadays, we often hear that excessive packaging from many different ways.Why have there been so many excessive packaging? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows. The first one is that the businessman want to make higer profits,so they use the beautiful box made of different materials to package the goods. Another and foremost,is the customers like to buy the goods have a beautiful packaging because then want to gave the goods to other people as gifts.If the packaging more beautiful the people will feel more happy,it is natural that excessive packaging. To solve the problem is not easy at all ,but is worthtrying . For one thing, the govermant should balance the relationship between qulity and price. On the other hand, we should make the people know that as the gift your mind important that the beautiful packaging. All these measures will certainly reduce the number of excessive packaging.
