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文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；词汇表达较灵活准确，高级词汇使用过少，另外注意文中个别的拼写错误。
Nowadays, we often hear that excessive packaging from many different ways.Why have there been so many excessive packagings? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows. The first one is that the company want to make higher profits,so they use the beautiful box made of different materials to package the goods. Another and foremost, the customers like to buy the goods have a beautiful packaging because then want to give the goods to other people as gifts.If the packaging more beautiful the people will feel happier,it is natural that excessive packaging. To solve the problem is not easy at all ,but is worthtrying . For one thing, the government should balance the relationship between quality and price. On the other hand, we should make the people know that as the gift your mind important that the beautiful packaging. All these measures will certainly reduce the number of excessive packaging.
