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Dear David, I'm glad to heard from you, also I'm glad to answer your question. Just like a Chinese want to learn English is very difficult, if you feel it is hard for you to learn Chinese, it is common. And I think, the first thing to learn a strenge language is to be patient with it. Then the second one, no one can learn language without parcticing as much as he can in listening, speaking, reading and writing, so if you want to improve your Chinese skill, you should put your heart in these things. The last one, even though you can't understand what a Chinese people say, you should take more chance to talk to a native Chinese people, it will help you to know more about how to use Chinese sentenes. I hope you will follow my advices and improve your Chinese soon. Waiting for you good news. Yours, Wang Ming
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