文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词;若注意一些语法错误,文章会更漂亮;作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练,单词拼写方面要更仔细。
The good old proverb "Look before you leap."reminds us that if you want to do somethings you must consider carefully. But when you see and hear somethings,you make a desision immediately is unwise. This phenomenon, to be precise, may be contributed to several reasons, and I shall here explore only two important ones. A good case is that, if you hear who say some rumours about you, and you not carefully to think the truth about the rumour and go to accuse that person.As a result you will lost your friends. Another case is that, if you teacher ask you to do somethings and you do it rapidly but you not spend some time to think about this,and you will find you are not right at the end of the case. In short, whatever you do, please remember the say"Look before you leap". If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, you”ll necessarily benefit a lot from it.
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