语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;可适当增加从句和复杂句的使用,注意文中的几处句子错误;作者用词较为灵活,但有较多拼写错误。
with the development of science comes more and more ebook,and they changed mordern citizen's life. ideas upon this phenomenan has been divitied. Some people think orginal book will been instead by ebook becaous ebook is more convenient.and people's life has changed,they often read at pieces time which cause problem on reading orgrinal book.Others hold different idea and there are three reasons upon this.first of all,readers could feel more from orgrial bookthan ebook.then,reading at elec-products for a long time does grest harm to readers' eyes.for those who really love reading,ebook is not a good choice.last but not least,people would like to get information form ebook but read orginal book. in my opinion,it is true that the number of ebook would grow while the number of orginal book would decrease,but ebook couldn't instead of orgrial book.