语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者词汇表达较为熟练,高级词汇使用不是很多;文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用。
With the development of science here comes more and more electronic book,and they changed modern citizen's life. Ideas upon this phenomenon has been divided. Some people think original book will be instead by electronic book because electronic book is more convenient.And people's life has changed,they often read at pieces time which cause problem on reading original book. Others hold different idea and there are three reasons upon this.first of all,readers could feel more from original book than electronic book.Then,reading at elec-products for a long time does great harm to readers' eyes. For those who really love reading,electronic book is not a good choice. Last but not least,people would like to get information form e-book but read original book. In my opinion,it is true that the number of electronic book would grow while the number of original book would decrease,but electronic book couldn't instead of original book.