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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33588
要求:
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分60.5分
评语:

文章高级词汇表达灵活,词汇量的积累还要努力,另外注意词汇拼写的检查;可适当增加从句的使用,注意文中的一些小错误;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

In my opinion, these are good consume practise in daily life. Clear about the details of price can make full use of money. The first reason, we can use less money to buy more commodities than than with normal price. The second, retailers want to promote the consume in preference price through different methods. We can gain more profits. In conclusion, like this promotion activity can benifite us in life, we can learn more about the reules and acquire more profits.

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