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Nowadays, we often hear that excessive packaging from many different ways. Why have there been so much excessive packaging? Maybe the reasons can be as follows. The first one is that the company want to make higher profits, so they use the beautiful box made of different materials to package the goods. Another and foremost, the customers like to buy the goods have a beautiful packaging because they want to give the goods to other people as gifts. If the packaging more beautiful the people will feel happier, it is the main reason of excessive packaging. To solve the problem is not easy at all, but is worth trying. For one thing, the government should balance the relationship between quality and price. On the other hand, we should make the people know that as the gift your mind is more important than the beautiful packaging. All these measures will certainly reduce the number of excessive packaging.