过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;作者句法基础不错,可适当增加复杂句的使用。
The good old proverb "Look before you leap"reminds us that if you want to do something you must consider carefully. But when you see and hear something, you make a decision immediately is unwise. This phenomenon, to be precise, may be contributed to several reasons, and I shall here explore only two important ones. A good case is that, if you hear who said some rumours about you, and you not carefully to think the truth about the rumour and go to accuse that person. As a result you will lose your friends. Another case is that, if your teacher asks you to do something. Although you do it rapidly but you not to spend some time to think about this, and you will find you are not right at the end of the case. In short, whatever you do, please remember the say"Look before you leap". If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, you”ll necessarily benefit a lot from it.
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