但从句使用不熟练,注意平时练习中多积累;能较灵活地使用高级词汇,希望能改善用词单一的情况;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。
Some people think that financial disparity affects friendship. I disagree with this point. Friend is not only partner in some ways. Same hobby attitude to other people and attitude to the world is the most important basics for friendship. There are lots of hobbies in the world do not need money. Financial disparity can not affect friends' friendship if the have same hobbies.