2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；从句和复杂句用的不错，但部分句子还有一些小问题；文中词汇表达较灵活丰富，不过请检查文章的单词拼写。

My hometown is Zherong,it lie in the Fujian,China.If my foreign friend will going to visit my hometown,I will take him to the Mout Dongshi to see the beautiful landscape and the him to the characteristic street to taste the delicious food and experience my hometown's custom. Why I want to take him to these place,there are several reasons for this.First,because the Mount Dongshi is the most important part of Mount Taimu,and it's altitude is more than eight thousands,the climate in the top of mountain is very comfortable,but the essencial reanson is the view of the mountain is very majestic,so I want to take my foreign friend to here.Second,I think my hometown's spcial snacks is the most delicious food,such as black rice,burger and so on,if you taste it,I believe you will love it.Final,there are many special custom in my hometown,like paper-cut and Maxian,so I want to show my hometown's culture to him and he will know me a lot by this.