行文较为流畅,作者文中过渡词使用的不错;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;文中能较熟练地使用一定的高级词汇,但词汇表达多样性不高,拼写检查还需加强。
With the development of technolegy,a increasing number of people communicate on the internet. When comes about the impact of the internet on interpersonal communication,people's ideas are divided. Some people hold the idea that the internet on interpersonal communicate makes our life easier and more convinent. Isn't limited by time and places, the interpersonal communication through internet makes it ture that a person could communicate with his/her friends or family far away. Others hold the oppsite idea that interpersonal communication through internet brings more diaadvantages. They think friends and family become not closer than before is responsible for communicating through words but not face by face. In my opinion,everything has two sides.Not only adcantages but also disadvantages the internet communication takes of. The only way we could do is using it propeolly.
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