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作者词汇表达较为熟练，高级词汇使用不是很多；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩。
Zhaoqing, a beautiful city in Guangdong province, is my hometown. Big as it is not, it is very beautiful in my mind. There are many famous places in Zhaoqing, including Dinghu Mountain and Qixingyan. If having a chance to be your guider, I will take you to the Dinghu Mountain, which is famous for its beauty. Every year many visitors are attracted to get there in order to have a see it. It is a mountain with many tall trees and a plenty of plants, which produce much O₂and make the air especially clear. Therefore, it attracts many people to enjoy the air and climb mountain. Besides, a beautiful and green lake lays on the middle of mountain. This lake, the mountains and plants constitute a chaming picture, which makes visitors be absorbed in it. I think you also like there.
