拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳;可以适当增加副词的使用。
NOTICE To improve the students'spoken English,the Students'Union has determined to hold an English speech contest next month.The preliminary contest holds on September 18 in the school library that has an amply space.The final contest will be held on September 29 in the auditorium of our university. The Union will invite seven experts to serve as judges.Every speaker will be judged from three aspects:script,eloquence and the reaction of the audience.The maximum time of each speaker is eight minutes.The results will be announced on the spot. Folks who intend to attend this activity may send an E-mail to us including your personal information.Everybody is welcome to join it. Students'Union