从句使用量稍显不足;行文较为流畅,作者文中过渡词使用的不错;作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练,单词拼写方面要更仔细。
With the development of technology, an increasing number of people communicate on the internet. When it comes about the impact of the internet on interpersonal communication, people's ideas are divided into two parts. Some people believe that the internet on interpersonal communication makes our life easier and more convinent. Isn't limited by time and places, the interpersonal communication through internet makes it ture that a person could communicate with his/her friends or family far away. Others hold the oppsite idea that interpersonal communication through internet brings more diaadvantages. They think friends and family become not closer than before is responsible for communicating through words but not face by face. In my opinion,everything has two sides.Not only adcantages but also disadvantages the internet communication takes of. The only way we could do is using it moderately.
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