句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;行文较为流畅,作者文中过渡词使用的不错;作者词汇表达较丰富准确,不过高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间。
With the development of technology, an increasing number of people communicate on the internet. When it comes about the impact of the internet on interpersonal communication, people's ideas are divided into two parts. Some people believe that the internet on interpersonal communication makes our life easier and more convenient. Isn't limited by time and places, the interpersonal communication through the internet makes it true that a person could communicate with his/her friends or family far away. Others hold the oppsite idea that interpersonal communication through the internet brings more disadvantages. They think friends and family become not closer than before is responsible for communicating through words but not face by face. In my opinion,everything has two sides.Not only adcantages but also disadvantages the internet communication takes of. The only way we could do is using it moderately.
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