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With the development of technology, an increasing number of people communicate on the internet. When it comes about the impact of the internet on interpersonal communication, people's ideas are divided into two parts. Some people believe that the internet on interpersonal communication makes our life easier and more convenient. Isn't limited by time and places, the interpersonal communication through the internet makes it true that a person could communicate with his/her friends or family far away. Others hold the opposite idea that interpersonal communication through the internet takes of more disadvantages. They think that friends and family become not closer than before is responsible for communicating through words but not face by face. In my opinion, everything has two sides. Not only advantages but also disadvantages the internet communication takes of. The only way we could do is using it moderately.
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