文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;从句用的不错,但有几处从句错误;词汇表达较灵活准确,高级词汇使用过少,另外注意文中个别的拼写错误。
It is not wise to come to a conclution immediately based on what you see as well as what you said.That means we need to think more than twice and keep calm rather than do something without thinking. In our dialy life,we are accustomed to making our decisions instantly,leading to the great loss of wealth even getting ourselves into troubles.For example,when people around us say a bad word about a strange people,we are more likely to get away from him.
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