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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

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题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任

字数:150满分:100分

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文章衔接手法恰当;句式变化较为明显,另外句法层面做的不错;作者词汇量积累需要继续努力,尤其高级词汇还有很大提升空间,另外拼写检查还需加强。

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Living ina an age when people are lack necessary communication and long time contact, we can nenver figure out the fact that nowadays there is more and more rare trust between people.Although classmates and even collegues have a competive relationship, on maintaining trust is also an essential way for people success. The reason why I insist on my viewpoint that on maintaining trust is an essentian and the most important path for eneryone toward success. To begin with, under the fierce competition circumstance, it is unwise doing some programs with individual efforts. we are a team. we should work together and trust everybody among our team, only this can we make sure finishing the program efficiently and perfectly. In addition, trust is an important bridge for maintaining people's ralationship.If there is no trust, there is no development. To sum up, trust plays a significant role among people even countries all over the world.

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