题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
文章在句法方面做的很棒,从句和复杂句的使用不错;文章衔接手法恰当;高级词汇使用较丰富,拼写做的很棒。
Living ina an age when people are lack necessary communication and long time contact, we can never figure out the fact that nowadays there is more and more rare trust between people.Although classmates and even colleagues have a competitive relationship, on maintaining trust is also an essential way for people success. The reason why I insist on my viewpoint that on maintaining trust is an essential and the most important path for everyone toward success. To begin with, under the fierce competition circumstance, it is unwise doing some programs with individual efforts. We are a team. We should work together and trust everybody among our team, only this can we make sure finishing the program efficiently and perfectly. In addition, trust is an important bridge for maintaining people's relationship.If there is no trust, there is no development. To sum up, trust plays a significant role among people even countries all over the world.