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Nowadays, more and more college students tend to take a part-time job in leisure. It has become an increasingly hot topic whether they should take part-time jobs. Different people have different attitudes towards it. As for me, there are both advantages and disadvantages about it. There are advantages for taking part-time jobs. First of all, by doing it, college students can get money from it, which can support their living and release parents’ financial burden. What’s more, it gives students a good opportunity to practice their competence, which can see if they have a got a good command of knowledge in college. But every coin has two sides. We cannot ignore the disadvantages of taking part-time jobs. For example, college students will hardly devote themselves to study with part-time jobs . As students, they must take study in the first place of college, which they pay a lot of money for study. In conclusion, taking part-time jobs can benefit students or bad for students, and the result depend on college students. Just take an effective arrangement for their college life, taking a part-time job or not.
