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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:11浏览次数:10397
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题目:It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket.把全部鸡蛋放到一个篮子里是不明智的。
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It's wildly and commonly believed that it's uwise to put all your eggs in one basket. There must be some truth in this statement. And I can't agree with it. The reasons can be listed as follows. To begin with,you are expected to have more choices in some occasions,then you are not able to make mistakes. And then,if you put all eggs in one basket you may lose it all without any preparation. Futhermore,there are lots of chances for you if you pay no attention to just one thing. Thereform,try to find more baskets,and we more probably make it. There are also many other good baskets for us,what we should do is that we ought to take notice of them and make good use of them. It's high time for us to put all eggs in more than one basket. Only in this way can we acquaint what we want more quickly and wisely.

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