作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;文章层次较为清晰;文中词汇较灵活,但要注意积累高级词汇,拼写错误也要注意。
It's wildly and commonly believed that it's uwise to put all your eggs in one basket. There must be some truth in this statement. I can't agree with it. The reasons can be as follows. To begin with, you are expected to have more choices in some occasions, then you may make mistakes. And then, if you put all eggs in one basket you may lose it all without any preparation. Furthermore, there are lots of chances for you if you pay no attention to just one thing. Thereform, try to find more baskets, and we may more probably make it. There are also many other good options for us, what we should do is that we ought to take notice of them and make good use of them. It's high time for us to put all eggs in more than one basket. Only in this way can we acquaint what we want more quickly and wisely.