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That's surprise! My foreign friends will come to my campus for seeing me.I'd like feel very exciting and surprise.So I think which place take her to see around my school. I want to take her to YIFU liberirary.YIFU liberary is the second largest liberary with ShaoYiFu contribute in AnHui. You kown,when we see a school,first see this school's liberary.Because the liberary is a good place that teach and give our knowledge.As the saying goes:Kownledge is power. Then,I will take her to lake of TingSong.This is our campus beatiful place.There are many tree around lake.Many students like go to there,also there become our school symbal.