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使用了部分简单的长难句，可适当增加一些复杂的长句；恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒；文章词汇丰富度较好，一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活。
A Beautiful City in China Enjoying the reputation of "the heart of China", Beijing is the beautiful city in China from my point of view. Both delicious foods and places of interest enjoys a great popularity at home and aboard. There are a variety of delicious foods in Beijing, among which Beijing Roast Duck stands out. With a unique and traditional way of cooking, Beijing Roast Duck has become so delicious and popular that it symbolizes the cate of China in the eyes of foriegners. When it comes to places of interest in Beijing, Tian'anmen Square occurred to me. Serving as the symbol of Chinese architectures, Tian'anmen Square witnesses millions of tourists from all over the world everyday. What's more, it is known that the Great Wall as well as the Forbidden Palace also enjoy great fame in the world. Apart from those above, Beijing Opera is a kind of interesting culture worthing our appreciating. Viewing Beijing Opera is a relaxed way to absorbed the knowledement of the citizens living situation, sometimes even the passing living standards. All in all, Beijing is a place combining the old as well as new Chinese style of buildings, foods, clothes and so on, making it an interesting city to reaserch.
可可英语 - 划词释义
