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作者有一定功底，可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆；文中词汇使用较丰富恰当，但高级词汇表达还需要很大提升；恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒。
A Beautiful City in China Enjoying the reputation of "the heart of China", Beijing is the beautiful city in China from my point of view. Both delicious foods and places of interest enjoy a great popularity at home and aboard. There are a variety of delicious foods in Beijing, among which Beijing Roast Duck stands out. With a unique and traditional way of cooking, Beijing Roast Duck has become so delicious and popular that it symbolizes the cate of China in the eyes of foreigners. When it comes to places of interest in Beijing, Tian'anmen Square occurred to me. Serving as the symbol of Chinese architectures, Tian'anmen Square witnesses millions of tourists from all over the world every day. What's more, it is known that the Great Wall as well as the Forbidden Palace also enjoy great fame in the world. Besides those above, Beijing Opera is a kind of interesting culture that worths our appreciating. Viewing Beijing Opera is a relaxed way to absorb the knowledge of the citizens living situation, sometimes even the living standards before. All in all, Beijing is a place combining the old as well as new Chinese style of buildings, foods, clothes and so on, making it an interesting city to research.
