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2007年专四作文真题:关于网络交友

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:33浏览次数:3091
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题目 Is It Wise to Make Friends Online?
说明 Nowadays the Internet has become part of people's life, and millions of young people have made friends online.
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:200满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分78.5分
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文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累。

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Internet development today has not only brought us many conveniences, but also gave us a new way to make friends. More and more people tend to make friends on line, and making friends on line has become a hot topic among the public. Some people are in favor of the idea while others are against it. As for myself, making friends on line is wise, for it is a good way for us to make friends. First of all, Internet give us an opportunity to make friends with people who are not in you real life. They may come from different places, have different culture backgrounds and come from every walk of life. but we can be in contact with these people who have the same idea and interest with us. What’s more, it’s convenient for us to communicate with each other on line. We can take full advantage of Internet that give us a convenient condition. Last but not least, we can share ideas with the friends on line, they are not in your real life so that you can free to talk with them. But every coin has two sides, we cannot ignore the potential risk of making friends on line, we must be careful when taking with a stronger. All in all, making friends on line is a wise way , which can benefits us a lot in many aspects. We should use the good condition of Internet for making friends.

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