2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

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When i heard you will visit my hometown.My heart is very excited.Because i think you will get a new sight level. First,we can visit Green Park which has long history.The famous wonder view-Zilu Fen were diged out here.The park also have many funny played machine and much green pants were provided to visitors.Visitors can breath more fresh air here. Then,we can visit Qicheng Road,it is a long finacial road which has many shops set the both sides.Visitor can buy some local famous foods or present for gift to family or friends. From all of my tell,if you can't wait to time?