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People always draw a conclusion by what they have seen.But what you see does not mean you can get a right conclusion righty. There was an old saying goes,"what you see is reality,what you hear is inreality".In my eyes,what you see may be not always right.In daily life ,we have heard a lot of news about old man was break down by young men. You may see a older near the young man lain on the ground,and you may immideltily think it is the young man who do the thing.Because people always think that old man is weak peope,they should get sympathetic and they may not say lines.The conclusion may be rowing if you do not investigate it.In fact , most of time the old people just want to get some money. As for a man who have being got education.We should think carefully for what we saw and heard.It is obvious that think more is better than think less!
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