文章组织结构良好;句法方面做的很棒,加强复杂句的使用;作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇,建议要多使用高级词汇。
People always draw a conclusion by what they have seen.But what you see does not mean you can get a right conclusion righty . There was an old saying goes : " what you see is reality,what you hear is false " . In my eyes , what you see may not be always right . In daily life ,we have heard a lot of news about old man was broken down by young men . You may see an older near the young man lain on the ground , and you may immediately think it is the young man who do the thing . Because people always think that old man is weak peope,they should get sympathetic and they may not say lines . The conclusion may be wrong if you do not investigate it.In fact , most of time the old people just want to get some money . As for a man who have being got education . We should think carefully for what we saw and heard . It is obvious that think more is better than think less !
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