文章学术词汇使用熟练,词汇表达较为丰富;文中应增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨;可以适当增加副词的使用。
NOTICE To improve the students'spoken English,the Students'Union has determined to hold an English speech contest next month.The preliminary contest holds on September 18 in the school library which have enough space.The final contest will be held on September 29 in the auditorium of our university. The Union will invite seven experts who have amply experiences that was obtained by research abroad to serve as judges.Correspondingly,every speaker will be judged from three aspects:script,eloquence and the reaction of the audience,and then the maximum time of each speaker is eight minutes.The results will be announced on the spot. Folks who intend to attend this activity may send an E-mail to us including your personal information.Everybody is welcome to join it. Students'Union