文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了;文章组织结构良好;可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用。
People always draw a conclusion by what they have seen. But what you see does not mean you can get a right conclusion righty. We always said: " what you see is reality, what you hear is false". In my eyes, what you see may not be always right. In daily life, we have heard a lot of news about old man was broken down by young men. You may see an older near the young man lain on the ground, and you may immediately think it is the young man who did the thing. Because people always thought that old men were weak people, they should get sympathetic and they might not say lines. The conclusion may be wrong if you do not investigate it. In fact, most of time, the old people just want to get some money. As for a man who was gained education. We should think carefully for what we saw and heard. It is obvious that think more is better than think less!
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