高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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in the past tunty years my hometown has changed a lot for instance in the past the enviroment was great but now it was full of plouted air and the diogxigen became more and more .and about the river has poured down many bad water.eh there was bulit many bulidings and more and more cars has used in the road .peoples life has proved a lot