单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;加强一些长句和复杂句的使用;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。
I have a good friend. She is a pretty girl with long black hair, two big black eyes and a red mouth. She is kind person. She always like to help other people. She is likely to read a book.I have a good friend. She is a pretty girl with long black hair, two big black eyes and a red mouth. She is kind person. She always like to help other people. She is likely to read a book.