小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend. She is a pretty girl with long black hair, two big black eyes and a red mouth. She is a kind person. She always likes to help other people. She is likely to read a book.I have a good friend. She is a pretty girl with long black hair, two big black eyes and a red mouth. She is a kind person. She always likes to help other people. She is likely to read a book.