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I‘m so delighted to hear that you will come to my hometpwn. Therefore, I will yake you to show around the beautiful views and slendid building. Located in the east of Shandong province, my large hometown, the city of Qingdao covers a total area of 11,000 square kilometers with a population of 8,700,000. Qingdao, whose symple is Qingdao Beer, is also famouse for its blue sky and beautiful beaches. I will take you to play in it and pick shell just like before. In summer, we can walk along the beach, go swimming or do some shopping. Besides, there are many other attractions in my hometown, among which Lao Mountain is the most populer, attracting tens of thousands of people from all parts of countries. We can climb the mountain to view all splendid building of Qingdao. Meanwhile, as an important internation port city in China, Qingdao is playing an increasing important part in the development of the foreign trade of our country. I believe you must be attracted. I also firmly believe that you will enjoy yourself so much as to forget to leave. So, I hope you have a good trip in my hometown.
