高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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In my memories ,my hometown was a great place ,it arouds moutains rivers planted trees and flowers.Though people has low-pay ,they lives happy. But now ,it changed a lot ,many buildings has built ,more and more familys used car,it took many polutions ,the industry has devolpted because of this many animals face to death