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I‘m so delighted to hear that you will come to my hometown. Therefore, I will take you to see the beautiful views and splendid building. Located in the east of Shandong province, my large hometown, the city of Qingdao covers a total area of 11,000 square kilometers with a population of 8,700,000. Qingdao, whose symbol is Qingdao beer, is also famous for its blue sky and beautiful beaches. I will take you to play in it and pick shell. In summer, we can walk along the beach, go swimming or do some shopping. Besides, there are many other attractions in my hometown, among which Lao Mountain is the most popular, attracting tens of thousands of people from all parts of countries. We can climb the mountain to view the splendid buildings of Qingdao. Meanwhile, as an important international port city in China, Qingdao is playing an increasing important part in the development of the foreign trade of our country. I believe you must be attracted. I also firmly believe that you will enjoy yourself so much as to forget to leave. So, I hope you have a good trip in my hometown.
