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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:35浏览次数:16930
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题目:Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interesting place you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;单词拼写很棒,可考虑增加高级词汇的使用量;文章层次较为清晰。

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I‘m so delighted to hear that you will come to my hometown. Therefore, I will take you to see the beautiful views and splendid building. Located in the east of Shandong province, my large hometown, the city of Qingdao covers a total area of 11,000 square kilometers with a population of 8,700,000. Qingdao, whose symbol is Qingdao beer, is also famous for its blue sky and beautiful beaches. I will take you to play in it and pick shell. In summer, we can walk along the beach, go swimming or do some shopping. Besides, there are many other attractions in my hometown, among which Lao Mountain is the most popular, attracting tens of thousands of people from all parts of country. We can climb the mountain to view the splendid buildings of Qingdao. Meanwhile, as an important international port city in China, Qingdao is playing an increasing important part in the development of the foreign trade of our country. I believe you must be attracted. I also firmly believe that you will enjoy yourself so much as to forget to leave. So, I hope you have a good trip in my hometown.

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