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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8974
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分71.5分
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语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者英语功底扎实,可适当调整文中从句数量;文中词汇较灵活,但要注意积累高级词汇,拼写错误也要注意。

用户练习作文:

As we all konw, when we meet someone strange, we may judge according to their appearance, and gain a result, but it is not advisable behavior,because we can't understand the person at a glance. so it is unwise to judge a person by their appearance. There are two reasons to prove that, first, when we meet someone at the first time, we can't know who is he/she? and even don't know the person is bad or good, maybe we can according his/her clothes or something to make a decision,but our eyes and brain might give us a misunderstand results. because a person who will not present all his/her character and personalty and so on. Second, if we are recognized the person as a kind person only throughout the talking, it is not yet enough.Everyone can hide their behavior ,we can't really konw how about the person. To sum up, if we want to know someone, we should through communication, or more observing the person, so that, we can reduce potential danger, and also best to matain a permanent friendship.

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